poem.. please give honest feedback if youve got time. :)

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Post by That_Kid » Sun Feb 10, 2008 12:32 am

it's not a bag of shit...it's pretty good i like itt..well it was pretty long and i read all the way to the end so it must've been good

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Post by Brown Eyed Beauty » Mon Feb 11, 2008 6:29 pm

Hiii girly, well with that poem i warmly welcome you to Asian Mix's Living Poet Society =) (i think i may be the only one to understand that joke.. huff :$ ) Hehe it's a beautiful poem x
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Post by kp86 » Tue Feb 12, 2008 2:44 pm

good poem... deep... i like...

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Post by cuzzy » Thu Apr 24, 2008 11:41 pm

Damn some powerful & deep meanings there yuno
enjoyed reading it
keep it up hun! :D

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Post by ** Pwincess ** » Tue May 13, 2008 2:24 pm

Wow This Poem Is Acctually Good =]
Lmfaoo I Readd It All :shock:
Youu Go Girl Lol =] :wink:

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